Pointless Redemption

Can a Paladin redeem a Succubus?
A classic opening
A classic opening
4th Jun 2015, 4:07 PM in Chapter One: The Paladin
Average Rating: 5 (2 votes)
Author Notes:
Lord22
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Well here it is, my first proverbial stab at the Webcomic Genre. A beginning is a very delicate time, and I have never been one for lengthy exposition. To that end, here is a fast and loose explanation of the roles of several characters you have no reason to care about.
Aren't I clever.
Seriously though, this is the first comic of my first webcomic, and I respectfully request a bit of slack. The art isn't anywhere near as good as it should be, the proportions are out of place, Will scarcely appears in what is supposed to be the beginning of his chapter and Sahshir looks like he's hi-kicking his way away from a giant boulder which looks more like a basketball.
User comments:
zaptoid
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zaptoid
Hey..everyone has their own style. There is no 'right' way of drawing. Keep up the good work!
Caley Tibbittz Collopy
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Caley Tibbittz Collopy
I love the title of this comic. Sounds like a great cable show or something, very cool.
Assistant Village Idiot (Guest)
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The art and the narrative will both become more automatic. Don't sweat the small stuff. Focus on ramping up - discover what you want to intensify from here. You could go more adventurous, more self-mocking, more humorous, more multiple plots. Any could launch from what you've started here. Have you seen this? http://www.giantitp.com/comics/oots0001.html
gamboling_pheasant (Guest)
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I particularly like the third panel.